Nati’s blog correction

Acupuncture Helps women have babies

The(X) acupuncture (C) helps woman's (Wf) that are with(Ww) treatment for fertility to have a baby. Studies of Southampton University(Wo) and the city's princess and (Sm) hospital have demonstrated that acupuncture on the time of embryo transfer increased the live(Ww) birth to 22 percent (Sm)without acupuncture for 35 percent with acupuncture(X).

The(x) woman's(Wf) have more possibilities to be ( Sm)mother if they use the (x) acupuncture us (Ww) a complement. Susan Seenan, of(Ww) infertility network UK, said that anything(Ww) that helps for through(Nn) infertility treatment is(Wt) good news.

It would be great, (Sm) because the(x) acupuncture is (Mw) natural Chinese medicine, so (Sm) don't (Wt) have secondary effects and help(s) for(x) the spirit and the(x) heal. (Ww)

•Wt: Wrong Tense
-Wf: Wrong Form
•Ww: Wrong Word
•Sp: Spelling
•p: Punctuation
•Wo: Word order
•Sm: Something Missing
•?: What the hell does this mean
•We: Wrong Expression
•C: Capital letter
-Nn: not needed
- (x) : this shouldn’t be th