Wednesday, October 29, 2008

correcting nati's last post


Hi Nati. You have been doing a good job. Regards.


Field Trip

Im (p) going to talk about my last field trip. It was the 3th (Ww = you say the 3rd). 4th. 5th of October (Wo), we went to Alhué, with Rodrigo Vargas Teacher (Wo) and (Ww) the subject call(Wf) Gestion Integrada de Cuencas, a very good name. We went on Friday at 10.00 o’clock, in a little bus. When we arrived, we went to meet(We) the place, specially the river. The place is very beautiful, I liked very much. In my group, call(Wf) fisiosfera, we made (Wf= you have to say “we took measurement) measurement, (Nn P) to the Chemical Properties of the river, like conductivity, temperature, pH, etc. When we went to made (Wf) a (We) measurement I felt(Wf) to the river (I fell into the river), (p) (Sm) that’s (Wf)heard (Wf= hurt ) me a little. The worst think (Sp) its(p) i`m (p & C) sick still now (Wo = you say: “I’m still sick”). Return with (We = you say Returning to) the history (Sm), we had to found (Wt) places with similar characteristic (Sp) on different parts of the river. The first night we ate noodles with salsa of course, there (Ww) was very good. The last night we ate barbecue, whit meat (We), chorizos, salad, pig, and we drank soda. The boys want (Wf) to return fast, because played Chile with Ecuador (Wo), and they want (Wf)to see the game. The other people and me (Wf = you say the other people and I) want (Wf) to return because we were very tired, and some people (Some of them) had class at Monday. I think it was a very good fiel (Sp) trip (Sm) I learn (Wf) and I laught (Wf) very much

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