Writing Right : The Chilean Independence Day

Diego’s Post

Hello my friends, today i (c) will write about the patriots parties(We). In this month the(Nn) Chileans(c) celebrate the first goverment council, specifically (1)18th of September (c).

The(Nn) Chileans(c) people celebrate this date with many happiness (We), (p)we go to the "fondas".(p)In the fondas we dance the (Nn)"cueca" a dance characteristic of Chile(Wo-We); we eat food than just eat in this date(We), for example: "empanadas", "anticuchos"or another kind of meat roast(Wo); we play a(Nn) typical games than(s) we learn in the (Ww)country, as the "rayuela" or the race in sacks(Wo). But this isn't all because we drink a lot of alcohol, but a(Nn) typical drinks for example: "chicha" or "terremoto".

When i(c) was a child just(Nn) play(Wt) with my "trompo", because my parents decided than(Ww or s) we have(Wt) to visite our family but when we visited to our family isn't always had cousins of my age(?), so i(c) enjoyed of(Nn) a good meat on the grilled and play(Wt)with my "trompo".

Actually i(c) enjoy the "18's" dancing "cueca"(Wo), metting(s) with my friends around(s) of a grilled with a barbacue of glass(?) and studying so much because always i have a test(Wo9 or a homework for the first day of return class(We).

Finally i(c) can say than i(c) haven't (1) a favourite "18", but i(c) (1)never to forgiven(Wt-Ww-Wf) the last "18" when i(c) travel(Wt) to the beach with some friends.....i (c) (1) never forgiven(Wt-Ww-Wf) or i (c) forgiven some moments of that date (?)....

OK friends....
this is all!(We)
BYE!
See You!!
And enjoy this 18!!!

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