
First post:
A very useful site
Well, one of my favourite sites on Internet is: www.chilewarez.org. This site is one of those where you can find many (Nn) interesting things for downloading (P) and (Nn) also (C+P) tons of useful information related to almost everything you want or (Nn) you have been looking for. In this way, you can (Wf) find from PC utilities to just a boring chat =]]. It is important to point out that you can also (We) share anything you want on its rooms.
The story of how I found this site is (Wt) because I needed an antivirus for my PC and I found it here. Since then, I have been part of this virtual community as (Sm)member which means that I visit it three or four times a week.
I really like this site because my life has become easier and also cheaper. This is because I do not have to pay anything for programs (Ww) or movies and I entertain myself a lot searching and finding different things for my convenience.
And there is a section which says “Educación & Profesión” where you can find lots of downloadable information from dictionaries to English programs (Ww).
Please check it out.
The Brand new correction
A very useful site
Well, one of my favourite sites on Internet is: www.chilewarez.org. This site is one of those where you can find interesting things for downloading. Also, tons of useful information related to almost everything you want or you have been looking for. In this way, you will find from PC utilities to just a boring chat =]]. It is important to point out that you can share anything you want on its rooms as well.
The story of how I found this site was because I needed an antivirus for my PC and I found it here. Since then, I have been part of this virtual community as a member which means that I visit it three or four times a week.
I really like this site because my life has become easier and also cheaper. This is because I do not have to pay anything for software or movies and I entertain myself a lot searching and finding different things for my convenience.
And there is a section which says “Educación & Profesión” where you can find lots of downloadable information from dictionaries to English software.
Please check it out.
Second post:
Something to believe in…
Sir Ken Robinson talked about the consciousness of what we should aim for as future teachers: To encourage and to perfect (Ww) children in order to they can (We) develop themselves (Wf) in what they really want to achieve. This is a very important thought and also I truly believe in it.
In addition, (Sn)to make( Wf) mistakes is something that culturally is not accepted, (P) but If ( c ) we can put ourselves in a more free position we would realize that it is only a trivial(Ww)believe. The thing is that (We) mistakes are part of our lives and they are important if (We) we can take the learning of them (We).
Finally, it is really important to point out what Robinson said about Creativity (c ) : This is the potential that all human beings have born with. That is why we have to develop it in order to let(Ww) children and also(Nn) people to find (Wf) what they are looking for in life.
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Sir Ken Robinson talked about the consciousness of what we should aim for as future teachers: To encourage and improve children in order to develop them in what they really want to achieve. This is a very important thought and also I truly believe in it.
In addition, the idea of making mistakes is something that culturally is not accepted. But if we can put ourselves in a more free position we would realize that it is only a tribal believe. Therefore, mistakes are part of our lives and they are important because we can learn from them.
Finally, it is really important to point out what Robinson said about creativity: This is the potential that all human beings have born with. That is why we have to develop it in order to encourage children and people to find out what they are looking for in life.
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