Everyone's a critic : Paulina's Blog.

First of all, I think that your blog is weak on features. For example, the first poor thing on your blog is the title. If you can manage that it will be more interesting in order to catch the classmates’ attention. As a suggestion you may try to look up for a catchy title in such a way that all of us can see different things and maybe would comment you on it.

Secondly, your blog does not have any kind of interesting links but the ones we have checked out already. I think it is important to have a blog in which you can find not just what you have done but maybe some links connected with education, music, movie trailers, websites you like personally, even if you have Facebook you can link it to your blog.

Finally, as a recommendation you might also check if you can put the pictures you leave out in the previous posts.

To sum up, although you have done a very good job in terms of writing and thinking and actually that is your best thing on your blog, you might try to fix these things up and I swear I’ll be the first one in check it out and comment you.

Sincerely yours

Pablo Valdes R.

Paulina's one .-

my bad work experience

First of all, My mind is not full of ideas to write about. So I found a topic (not very interesting for you, I think) to do my homework.

As many of you know, I did one of my work experiences in a school, where, I had to stay almost the whole day in a tiny room. Moreover, I couldn’t went to the classrooms because my guide teacher didn’t allow me. Even more, I couldn’t be near of the students in the breaks, because the principal was almost every time looking what I was doing. That experience was so bad, even because the teacher after two months was too disagreeable with me. She said that I wasn’t motivated but how I was gonna be motivated if a couldn’t be in the classroom while she was giving the lesson?.

So what do you think about that?

Paulina's correction.

A Very Disappointing Work Experience.

First of all, my mind was not full of ideas to write about something interesting. So, I found a topic (not very interesting for you, I think) to do my homework.

As many of you know, I did one of my work experiences in a school where I had to stay almost the whole day in a tiny room. Moreover, I couldn’t went into the classrooms because the teacher that I worked with didn’t allow me to do that. What is more, I even couldn’t be near of the students in the breaks because the principal was observing what I was doing all the time.

That experience was terrible bad also because the teacher, after two months of being working with me, she started to behave very disagreeable saying that I wasn’t motivated at all and I thought how I was going to be motivated if a couldn’t be in the classrooms working with the students.

So what do you think about that?

Pablo.-